To start this Writing Wednesday off, I'm going to use this as a hint ;)
So, weighing in at 1325 words, we have Dance! Enjoy x
Smoothing the folds of her dress,
Violet took a long, shaky breath to calm herself before she descended. You’d
think, for a Potter, she wouldn’t be that bothered by attention, and yet her
heart still raced in her chest, pounding so fast she was sure she could feel it
pressing into her rib cage.
Taking a quick peek around the
corner, she spotted him. He certainly looked the part of a champion in his
dress robes, and as he turned, she could see a violet tie around his neck,
which he was absentmindedly fiddling with, constantly tightening it, then
loosening the knot.
He was just as nervous then. That
was good; that meant she wasn’t the only one.
Swiping her palms against the
fabric of her dress, she couldn’t help but admire the design of it. She hadn’t
thought her uncle paid that much attention to things like fashion, or even her
dress size, but when it had arrived carried by two owls last week, she had
fallen in love with the violet silk, which not only brightened her flaming hair,
now piled into a mass of braids on her head thanks to Alex’s hair expertise,
but brought out her violet eyes, making them look unique rather than
outlandish, even by magical standards.
“You know we’re starting the
dance, right?” questioned a voice from behind her. Cedric had snuck up on her
when she wasn’t looking. After recovering from the mini heart attack her best
friend had caused, Violet dared herself to look him in the eyes. The grey of
his eyes seemed to gleam silver with anticipation. Taking her hands in his,
Violet revelled in the warmth of his touch. “You’ll be fine Vi, I’ll be
leading.”
“Like that’s something that’s
meant to reassure me,” she retorted, a small smirk gracing her face, matching
the crooked quirk of his lips.
“You’re being sarcastic. All’s
good, then!” He smiled, beginning to tug her towards the stairs. “Come on,
Champions are meant to get to their positions before everyone enters.
McGonagall’s gonna turn us into reindeer if we’re not there.”
They were halfway down the stairs
when Violet stopped, caught by the eyes of everyone around her. Bowing her
head, Violet withdrew her hand from Cedric’s, ready to retreat back to the
Hufflepuff dormitory before he caught a hold of it once again, holding it even
tighter than he had before.
“They’re all staring, Cedric,”
Violet pleaded, glancing at the occupants of the entrance hall, spotting the
twins in one corner with Angelina and Alicia. They offered excited waves and
supportive thumbs ups before returning to their conversation. Harry was nowhere
to be seen; maybe he was outside Ravenclaw tower waiting for his date, a fifth
year by the name of Cho.
“Why shouldn’t they be staring at
the belle of the ball, Vi?” her own date asked, smiling up at her, the same
smile she’d been seeing everyday since the day they’d met five years before.
“Don’t say that when there’s a
Veela descendant in there,” she directed, keeping her eyes on their intertwined
hands. Alex had painted her nails an orange-gold to contrast her dress, but
match her hair.
“You’re clueless, Vi,” Edward
whispered with a shake of his head. “Who cares if there are Veela or not? I
certainly don’t! I’d much rather be spending my time with my best friend,
anyway. You’ll be more understanding if I step on your foot anyway,” he said
with a wink, before pulling her down the stairs once again, his grip on her
hand keeping her from stopping.
Ignoring the inhabitants of the
entrance hall, Cedric guided Violet all the way to the doors of the Great Hall.
Holding the door open for her, Violet slipped inside, seeing Fleur and her
date, Ravenclaw Quidditch captain, Roger Davies.
“Looks like you lucked out,
Cedric,” Roger commented whilst shaking Cedric’s hand before offering a smile
to Violet.
“Yeah, I have,” Cedric said
confidently, wrapping a hand around Violet’s waist, “but it seems I’m not the
only one.” At this he nodded towards Fleur, who was scrutinising the castle’s
decorations, murmuring something about perpetual ice?
At the sound of the Great Hall’s
doors opening once again, Violet turned to see Harry in a bottle green set of
dress robes, with Cho hooked around his elbow. It took Violet a moment to calm
herself from the instant realisation of how much Harry looked like Dad. Yes,
people commented on the siblings’ resemblance to their parents, bar their eyes,
but now, looking far more mature than fourteen, Violet could finally see it. She could see how his glasses
rested just on the bridge of his nose like Dad’s had, how his eyes seemed to
shine by the lights of the decorations around them, just like Mum’s had when it
came to Christmas, how his hair, although looking like it had been tamed, was
as was as unruly as ever. Violet smiled to herself, thinking of the boy she’d
met 5 years ago; that boy was long gone, replaced by an experienced boy who always
had his heart in the right place.
A squeeze of her waist brought
Violet’s eyes to the other boy in her life. Cedric smiled at her, pointing to
the doors at the other side of the Hall. In strode Viktor Krum, with a girl
Violet barely recognised on his arm. Of course she knew it was Hermione; the
Gryffindor had told her about her suitor as soon as he’d begun talking to her.
Violet had to say, the dress she’d helped Hermione pick fitted so well, the
skirt flowing in controlled waves, just like her hair. Hermione would have to
tell her how she’d tamed her wild locks without making it look overworked.
Smiles were exchanged between the two girls, compliments were mouthed, all
whilst Hermione eyed Harry, who was having trouble recovering his jaw from the
floor.
Dumbledore’s voice sounded behind
the 4 pairs, calling them into position. Cedric began to lead Violet to the
eastern side of the hall. As he settled his hand upon her waist, albeit rather
shyly, his anxious smile morphed into one of confidence, a transformation
Violet had witnessed one too many times in the last couple of months. “Still
going to forgive me if I stand on your foot?” he asked, the anxiety still
showing in his voice.
“That depends if you’ll forgive
me,” Violet smiled, squeezing his shoulder in encouragement.
The hall filled at an agonising
pace, all four partners stood poised like wind-up ornaments, waiting for a
child to wind them up and for the dance to begin. The enchanted instruments got
into position, with Cedric’s exhale hidden in the noise they were making. There
was only time for another reassuring squeeze of their hands before the dance
began.
Violet decided to ignore the
crowd for this dance – for this dance, she would be alone with Cedric, held in
each other’s hands, completely trusting each other to make sure they didn’t
fall. This was the first time since his name had been pulled from the Goblet where
they could go completely uninterrupted, and Violet did not want to waste it.
The molten silver of his eyes
gleamed, his smile warm and genuine, not just the feigned confidence of a
Champion, but the warm trust of a friend. His other hand slipped to her waist
as the dance came to the first lift. With an almost apologetic smile, he lifted
her, hands keeping her aloft for those few moments.
This continued; the reassuring
smiles, the communicative eyes, and even the trodden toes. Once the Champion’s
dance was over, Violet was already missing that private time with her best
friend, but another squeeze of her hand held a promise. His smile told her that
he was missing it too, that he was already planning more private time, no
hordes of followers, no Rita Skeeter, just the Potter and the Champion.
You are SUCH a good writer! You actually make me feel kind of bad, haha. I love your sophisticated style of writing, it creates such strong imagery - I would seriously buy your book :)
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Lucy :3
Thank you!!! You shouldn't feel bad! Each style of writing's different. I bet, if I were to read something of yours, I'd feel the same as you do for mine!
DeleteHere's hoping there'll be some on the shelves for you to pick up someday :)
No, don't shut up, my ego needs feeding XP
Eve <3
Harry Potter fan fic? ;) I LOVE IT!! I love your writing style too. It's so easy to follow xx
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The Life of Little Me
What's wrong with a HP fanfic? Thank you! I've never been told it's easy to follow; I usually think I'm rambling!
DeleteEve <3